Black and White (Poem)

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Today happened to be a very gloomy day for me just like yesterday. Yesterday, I visited my college in the night. If you ask me why, I'm afraid I've no answer to that. I thought a lot about my past years and about the person who filled my thoughts, my dreams and my every wakeful moments in those days. Maybe this is 'coz I said "Goodbye" to my PYT and my mind became empty again. Anyways... I came back and penned down my thoughts in my diary and which appeared to me as some sort... er... ahem... poetry. I've posted that in my other blog and I request you all to take a look at it and tell me whether it really sounds like a poetry or something else?

Anyways... Here's the link to my other blog - http://jstgibberish.blogspot.com/

Comments

Anonymous said…
as I said on your other blog, your ability to write from your heart is beautiful.

keep sharing my friend
September 10, 2009 at 12:40 PM
dannyd said…
I have been browsing this blog for a little bit, and I have to say that you are a brilliant writer!

Thanks for following my blog! I will be following you, and hope that you can download my toolbar soon, and will continue to comment... :D
September 10, 2009 at 2:33 PM
4evernite said…
That is a powerful poem and yes, I would most definitely call that poetry. It pulled at my heart-strings with every line read. I hope it helped to write it and get some of the blues away from your heart and onto paper?
September 11, 2009 at 8:26 AM
Jo said…
Hi, my friend. I'm sorry this finds your heart in such turmoil.

It simply wasn't right this time. Someday--maybe not tomorrow, but one day there won't be even the slightest hesitation on the girls part whose heart won yours--she will not be able to contain a very enthusiastic 'yes' and your love will be equal in all measures.

Stay strong and keep writing....

Thanks you for always stopping by my blog--your comments of love and support are deeply felt and appreciated.

Peace, love and happiness,
~Jo
"Diary Of A Sad Housewife"
September 11, 2009 at 12:43 PM
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